"Fire In The Sky" Tanka
"Fire In The Sky"Fire in the sky,perfect beauty to the eye,a god you must be;with another god at nightmaking sure we are all right.--Michael S. Love-c2002
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this is quite beautiful, mike ... a most enjoyable read ...I'm sure it's my pronounciation of "fire" that causes me to come up a syllable short in your first line ... I've seen it used as both a 1 or...
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Thank you Beth, thank you Karen, I'm happy you both enjoyed this! Well shoot, guess we'll have to see what zee Master has to say about that first line, hee hee! peace!
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Who, me?! I usually use fire as a two syllable word, but that is the British English pronounciation; I've heard it spoken with both one and two syllables. I think this is one of those diphthong words,...
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Thank ya Soulsease, mucho appreciation as always! Now I keep playing around and trying to say fire in the one syllable. I can't do it, ha ha!
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lol! sorry ... I keep trying to figure how you guys manage to stretch it into two! Visit The Maelstrom
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I like this very much Mike the form and the content. Although I am english, I tend to count fire as one syllable - if I think about it it just about has two, but feel they are not distinct enough for...
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woohoo! I've got someone on my side ... lol! valoe ... I understand HOW they say it ..... it's the WHY that's got me baffled ... ! go figure accents, eh? (besides ... it's fun to bust on the guys!)my...
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That's cool, that's all right, so it'll be me and the "soulman" in a tag-team WWE cage match against you and Valoe then Beth, and Karen can be the ref if she likes,and all because the two of you can't...
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This is beautiful Mike and very unique, and I really enjoyed it. Beautifully written, my friend. Oh, and I've always counted "fire" as two syllables.. never thought of it as...
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The spiritual feel that this tanka gave me touched deep inside... Stunning write..Versified Musings at one click If you're choosing inSoulStarz Galaxy
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Thank you Mystic! So the majority says "two" then!Mystahr, thank you very much, your read is an honor.
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M-W, huh? If that's the source of your pronounciation, then no wonder you have probs! Try the Oxford English Dictionary... Every new beginning comes from some other beginnings end...Why not try a new...
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!!! ROFL!!! but .... I wanna sound like a good jersey girl ... not a brit ....!!! *runs and hides*They flutter behind you, your possible pasts ... some brighteyed and crazy, some frightened and lost....
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Greeneyes, thank you so much, always appreciate your reads, it's an honor! So, how do you pronounce "fire", ha ha!
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Fab Tanka!!!!BTW......Fi-er!!!!! hehe! A never-ending petal, swirled 'round your heart. ~Calla~ Drench yourself in the words of Callalily Cove
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OOOOOOOPS!! Wrong name!!!!egads......someday I'll remember to change these names!!!*eyeroll*
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